2 of 3 Poems I have heard Len read beautifully | A. Hirsh
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- Apr 13, 2020
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Updated: Apr 29, 2020
Folding Star
(a star rising at folding time;
an evening star)
My book as it lapses into the bath
unminded, relaxes,
and now the stitches give, and the pages
petal and fan
as though it were being eased of some pain:
of someone's pain
it had not known of. Soon the ink,
diluted, trickles
out with the slurry of cooling bathwater
prattling down
through a succession of pipes
to pool somewhere,
too cold now to bathe in, somewhere outside
where the sheep are gathering
past their bedtime—pausing to drink
and drinking too much.
Above them an apoplectic star
turns on itself:
once and again, quarto, octavo,
impressively dense.
The sheep talk freely in the dark.
The foundering shallows.
O I have taken too little care of
care of this.
—Jeff Dolven

I love this poem. "Take care"--Jeff wrote another book about that. This community has been good at taking care of me, and inspiring me to take more care of/ care of this.